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Awashima - Pale Island by oneoftwo Awashima - Pale Island by oneoftwo
Awashima - Pale Island - Second child to Izanagi and Izanami - Considered a deformity

You can purchase this print on my etsy:
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I wanted to do another Print for Ohayocon (Even though my current streak of making successful one shave been failing), so Im testing it up on here first to see your reaction. If you have anything youd like tweaked about it, Im open to critiques!

Awashima's design is (c) to me
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'Awashima' is well drawn and I love the feel of it.

The way you did the composition is well balanced, having the orange smokes going diagonally at the top and diagonally at the bottom while the yellow clothes along with the red sash dominating the centre.

I like how you have flat colors and then place a texture/pattern over it. It seems like you cut out the pieces from various papers and pasted them all onto one paper to make this amazing art.

My only issue is that the background sort of eats up the warm colors you used for the character there, so the image ends up losing some of its impact on the viewer.

But overall, very lovely artwork!
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jenocidal9 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is simply beautiful, I love the design! So great and yet simple? Thanks for sharing your awesome work!
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visulies Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The sleeves' brightness seems to be too much. (extreme brightness+saturation killed out the details in my opinion ; ;)
I'm not sure if it's due to screen settings, or if it was purposely done. But I think if the brightness/luminescence was turned a notch down, it'll still be bright enough to bring attention towards the center and doesn't cause issues to the composition,\.

I really love how it looks though @ A @
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wumbosauce Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
wow that's beautiful.
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oneoftwo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Thanks so much! Comments are always appreciated. It makes me feel like I did something right XD
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wumbosauce Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
of course! btw, are you coming to katsucon?? i want to see your art in display again and buy stuff from you!
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oneoftwo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
Sadly Katsucon has a policy now where they don't want people who have been in their AA in previous years >< I tried to find someone to share with me but it didn't work out.
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wumbosauce Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
..WHAT. Ughhh, man. Then I hope you come next Katsu or Summer's Otakon.
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oneoftwo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
I'm planning on going to Otakon at least, but I have an online store now if that helps any XD
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wumbosauce Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
orly? link me?
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oneoftwo Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2013
Here you go:

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